This is my poem which i feel is no longer mine

Mostafa Mouhibe, who is from Morocco, has sent us this delightful poem.  A wonderful mixture of the serious and the (almost) flippant it seems to me that Mostafa is demanding a response from his readers.  So come on then, what is stopping you?!

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One Response to “This is my poem which i feel is no longer mine”

  1. Maria do Céu Costa says:

    From a very starting point the poet conveys the value of altruism: “… don’t think that me or I is me!/It may be you, she or even we.”
    He needs to emphasise the importance of “the other”: ” … for with him or her we are made to live together.”
    He looks very sensitive to differences, and he cautiously adverts to be avoided concepts like ” clash of civilizations”, “conflict of cultures”, preferring “a fusion of theirs”.
    The poem ends up justifying the poet’s view of integration, we think.

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